Saturday, July 5, 2014

Because I Have To. Comments

Rating: 5.0

[S]mile, to hide my tears.
La(U) gh, to hide my fears.
Whispe[R], to hide my words.
Belie[V]e, to hide my doubt.

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Gary Hembree
COMMENTS
* Sunprincess * 26 August 2014

........I really like this poem a lot....and I like how you wrote it....survive is what life is all about....

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Noreen Carden 05 July 2014

Gary I have already commented on this twice but my comment seems to disappear.Gary this poem is wonderful and very clever I am so impressed well done you and I know you will survive

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Noreen Carden 05 July 2014

Gary this is wonderful and so clever.I am so impressed and I know you will survive. if I could give it one hundered I would so I am giving it a well deserved ten

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