Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Because The Pleasure-Bird Whistles Comments

Rating: 2.9

Because the pleasure-bird whistles after the hot wires,
Shall the blind horse sing sweeter?


Dylan Thomas
Carl Bowers 30 March 2016

This reading, line by halting line, is wooden, And false to Thomas as the true cross is true. Twain said, You have the words, but not the music. You must do better, else faith snap in two.

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Paul Amrod 30 June 2015

This man could write, couldn't he? Absolutley lyrical phonetically gorgeous and a thrill to read out loud. Bob Dylan decided to take his name on. My Composition teacher met him in a jazz club in the early fifties. Stravinsky also put Don't go lightly into the Dark Night to music. Also his choice of instruments was gorgeous. Trombone choir and Strings and a Tenor. God bless him,

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Carl Bowers 30 March 2016

It's Do not go gentle into that good night- and what other inaccuracies do you remenber? Please honor the dead by being faithful to their truth.

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Paul Amrod 30 June 2015

The man could write couldn't he! I havew always enjoyed his work. Bob Dylan grabbed his name for himself. He met my Composition teacher in the eraly fifties in a jazz club in New York. God bless him!

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Brian Jani 26 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine oit

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