Wednesday, March 23, 2005

Becker Vs. Dylan Comments

Rating: 4.7
Becker was sitting on the steps
in the final moments of day-

catching fireflies with his fingers,

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COMMENTS
G. Murdock 07 December 2005
This poem shot across my brow like a flashbulb comet. I stand and applause it aloud. It leaves a blue dot in my vision which will last for a long time. Like mentholatum on sore limbs. Great!
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Joy Vanderhelm 06 November 2005
Very stylized. Your imagery and comparisons are amazing. Your words flow through my mind with as much grace as god can allow. Keep it coming.
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Uriah Hamilton 27 May 2005
Amberlee, you are a Goddess of words! Do I have to pray to thee?
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Emily Nunchuck 31 March 2005
I loved this so much. I just love the ending, the imagery and metaphors are beautiful.
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