Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Becoming One Comments

Rating: 4.5
I weave you into my poetry.
Your thoughts entwine with mine
Creating a tapestry of old ideas
Presented in the freshness of new love.


Suzanne Hayasaki
Enjoyed this much, young lady...Your structural movement is virtually flawless compliments of crisp, tight linage that wraps from one line to the next mellifluously...Stellar crafting ~FjR~
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Suzanne Hayasaki 22 July 2015
Thank you very much for this wonderful compliment!
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