Susan Ash

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Becoming The Enemy - Poem by Susan Ash

I wrote him a poem to tell him
How our love felt easy and free,
I wrote about how good it felt
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Comments about Becoming The Enemy by Susan Ash

  • Janice Windle (10/7/2007 3:29:00 PM)

    Sue, this is a heartfelt poem whose content I can relate to so easily - the story of so many partnerships that grow sad and destructive. Your metre is so simple and direct, this has the lyrical feeling of a poem by William Blake and we are led along by it willingly and easily, deceptively simply in fact. Buon'lavoro amica mia! (Report)Reply

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  • Zen Bojczuk (5/26/2007 6:19:00 AM)

    Excellent from beginning to end. Great title too. Lots of emotion in this poem. Zen (Report)Reply

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  • Angela Norris (5/18/2007 7:54:00 AM)

    Absolutely fabulous. A woman after my own heart. Love it. Love it. Love it.
    Gave it a ten.
    Angela
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