Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 91,380 Points (1978 / India)

Bee - Poem by Rini Shibu

If you are sweet
the bee buzz around to steal
If you try to steal
the bees flies behind to sting
And You are the loser
in this ring

Topic(s) of this poem: people


Comments about Bee by Rini Shibu

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (8/1/2018 2:26:00 PM)


    Sadly yes, Rini, the bee is always there to buzz around whether to steal or to kill..
    A lovely poem. So cutely short.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (5/9/2018 8:46:00 AM)


    Bees may be sweet as they produce honey but if a bee takes you otherwise thousands come to attack with that bee. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (4/25/2018 4:18:00 AM)


    A short sweet poem Rini...Thanks for sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/24/2018 1:08:00 AM)


    Hi Rini,
    Sweetness may be a trap, as you say
    An invitation to the unscrupulous, to give a try.
    But it is always better to be sweet than bitter
    For, He has given us all, a sweet tooth.
    And, of course, my wife is so sweet
    She has got high sugar in her blood.
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (4/23/2018 11:55:00 AM)


    This beautiful brevity has loveliest metaphors. A mesmerizing read. I love the way your thoughts go, Rini. Brilliant! A 10 and more for the vote. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O Brian (4/23/2018 9:24:00 AM)


    Is it not better to give than to receive? (Especially stings)
    :)
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  • Kostas Lagos (4/23/2018 3:09:00 AM)


    Another remarkable poem Rini! (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/23/2018 1:23:00 AM)


    Dear friend Rini, such a wonderful poem🤓🤓🤓...10++++ (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2018 12:35:00 AM)


    This is a very nice poem about bees. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (4/22/2018 11:58:00 PM)


    Rini. a great metaphor and so true. (Report) Reply

  • Practicing Poetess (4/22/2018 11:57:00 PM)


    Do not- - No, Never! - - Try to steal the bee's honey or meat. Unless you are a beekeeper, and are well-covered.
    Cute poem about how the bee guards its honey with ferocity.
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  • (4/22/2018 11:21:00 PM)


    Never thought of bees that way
    But your charming poem
    Did my feelings sway.

    Enjoyed very much!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2018



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