Emu Getachew

Rookie - 0 Points (October 18 / Ethiopia)

...Before You Came... - Poem by Emu Getachew

My beloved I have much to say,
Oh my! where should I start?

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  • (2/8/2011 9:24:00 AM)

    Emu - your word selection of the love transformation is so vivid... beautiful! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/4/2010 3:48:00 AM)

    Hi Emu...thanks for yr comment on my write....'B4 u Came' of yrs is nice & touchy...i feel like writeing something on yr imagination and depth...good touch! (Report)Reply

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  • John Knight (12/9/2009 5:55:00 PM)

    Hi Emu - you are not alone in your reminises. I like this poem it has good structure and is full of retrospective pathos. I have scored it TEN. When we are parted form our Lover - its like you say - There is nothing worth painting - The Seasons are all awry - Even the Mountains lose their glory - The birds stop singing and the Theatre closes - There are no more love stories - or poems. But when the Beloved appears - in my experience - all is sweetness and light again. I am sure you experience the positives as well as the negatives which form the substance of this poem. Well done a lovely evocative Poem. love you in Poetry - JOHN X (Report)Reply

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  • (12/9/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    Awwww let hope your love stays there..... (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/9/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    Oh what a kind of love when awiats the gleams
    to rave up by the shadow of dream
    eyes yet meanders on window of thrill
    at the altar of silence spring and winter, most passionately ingenious spucing over the skin of resurrection yet being resilient as wrought by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
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  • (12/8/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    The title says everything of this mesmerized poem Emu!
    What else it's lovable indeed.
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/8/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    This poem pertains wonderful imagery with a touch of modern sensibility. Love makes things more beautiful than their actuality. Well written, Emu...10/10.
    Best Wishes.

    Naseer
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  • (12/8/2009 5:22:00 PM)

    Ah.. definely.. your love made you see beauty in things. awesomely said (Report)Reply

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  • (12/6/2009 4:58:00 PM)

    Emu: What a beautiful correlation between the wonderful work of God and His nature. Being saved brings back the mountains, streams and all the things missing Before You Came. Praise his name forever. Your friend in Christ, Lynn (Report)Reply

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