Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Being But Men Comments

Rating: 3.1

Being but men, we walked into the trees
Afraid, letting our syllables be soft
For fear of waking the rooks,
For fear of coming


john sheller 21 February 2018

we have a choice to remember to watch the stars in wonder; it should be the aim and the end. Eudora Welty wrote of another boy in LOSING BATTLES: The young boy wandering through the world moonlit wondered

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Kim Davis 07 July 2017

This work of genius encapsulates the lessons of the transition from innocence to the harsh realities of life. For a great example of this based on the poem read Gordon Parker's novel A Waking of Rooks

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Charity Nduhiu 11 December 2014

Well said and interesting. Good job

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Brian Jani 26 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine oit

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