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Monday, May 8, 2006

Beneath The Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0
What lies beneath the ocean blue,
In depths of mariner's legends?
Where creatures hide in crevices,
And divers get the Bends.

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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Diane Violet 03 November 2009
I miss the ocean but as for going into the deep I think I'll imagine along with you! Wildly imaginative poem Dee!
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Yelena M. 18 March 2009
As if I drowned into the ocean depth reading your poem :) Very imaginative! Even if I am not that bold, too :)
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Saint Cynosure 19 August 2008
And another...I love it, I love it.
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I loved your poem and the description you created so well from beginning to end! i FELT as though I was there and I could feel the cold dark waters and I was SCARED of what was going to pop out next ((Smile)) Also I loved how you added humor to the end of your poem as it made me laugh and relate to your statement 'I am not that BOLD.' Keep up the good work. Shelley
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Not a member No 4 27 January 2007
If the measure of a poem is it's ability to draw the reader into its world then this must surely be a good poem. You had me down there looking about and imagining all sorts of madness. More good work. xx
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Melvina Germain 21 January 2007
I like this one also Dee, it has nice flow, good rhyme and wonderful imagry. You brought me into the poem, I can picture myself beneath the water looking in the dark wondrous ocean.---Melvina---
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Wondrous. Those unknown depths never fail to fire the imagination. Ez
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Ruby Root 27 September 2006
Hi Dee, Beautiful poem. I really like this. It sounds fun. I have never done diving. I don't know if I would be brave enough. Take care. Excellent poem.
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Roy Storey 12 July 2006
This world is a lot biger then we think and so is the sea, we do not know a lot about, Take care. Roy.
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nn mn 16 June 2006
Nicely put. The ending is exquisite. Was expecting something else - nice surprise.
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Geoff Warden 10 June 2006
Dee, sometimes we must reach for the unknown but carefully excellent write
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Brian Dorn 04 June 2006
Dee, neither would I be so bold, ... but I often wonder the same things. It's amazing to think of what we've discovered in space but how little we know about the depths of the ocean. Excellent write! ! Brian
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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2006
Lady Dee Boldly going where only hearts can follow, beautiful coral of words Love Duncan X
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WELL CRAFTED, DEE...CRISPED STRUCTURE...RHYME IN TIME...DOVETAIL FLUX... '' BENEATH THE OCEAN'' SURFACES WITH A PERFECT 10 RATING! '''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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Edwin Robinette 08 May 2006
We know very little about our ocean depths, but it's fun to wonder what is there. I keep hoping that someone will find something huge and monsterous for us to marvel at, but that's just me.
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Preeti - is here! 08 May 2006
nice one! i too wonder the same...
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Esther Leclerc 08 May 2006
Oh, this poem brings back my old dreams of oceanography, Jacques Cousteau my hero! Love '...in depths of mariners' legends'. The last frontier, our beautiful seas. Thanks for this. : ]
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Goldy Locks 08 May 2006
she lives beneath the sea: prisoner of pirates prisoner of dreams! nice write- oh how i love the ocean & marvel over what creatures must live in those dark depths!
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