Dee Daffodil


Beneath The Ocean - Poem by Dee Daffodil

What lies beneath the ocean blue,
In depths of mariner's legends?
Where creatures hide in crevices,
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Comments about Beneath The Ocean by Dee Daffodil

  • (11/3/2009 9:44:00 AM)


    I miss the ocean but as for going into the deep I think I'll imagine along with you! Wildly imaginative poem Dee! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/18/2009 6:52:00 AM)


    As if I drowned into the ocean depth reading your poem :) Very imaginative! Even if I am not that bold, too :) (Report) Reply

  • Saint Cynosure (8/19/2008 4:05:00 PM)


    And another...I love it, I love it. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2007 3:21:00 PM)


    I loved your poem and the description you created so well from beginning to end! i FELT as though I was there and I could feel the cold dark waters and I was SCARED of what was going to pop out next ((Smile)) Also I loved how you added humor to the end of your poem as it made me laugh and relate to your statement 'I am not that BOLD.'
    Keep up the good work.
    Shelley
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  • (1/27/2007 5:02:00 PM)


    If the measure of a poem is it's ability to draw the reader into its world then this must surely be a good poem. You had me down there looking about and imagining all sorts of madness. More good work. xx (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (1/21/2007 3:42:00 AM)


    I like this one also Dee, it has nice flow, good rhyme and wonderful imagry. You brought me into the poem, I can picture myself beneath the water looking in the dark wondrous ocean.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • (10/26/2006 8:57:00 AM)


    Wondrous. Those unknown depths never fail to fire the imagination.
    Ez
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  • (9/27/2006 7:06:00 AM)


    Hi Dee, Beautiful poem. I really like this. It sounds fun. I have never done diving. I don't know if I would be brave enough. Take care. Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2006 9:38:00 AM)


    This world is a lot biger then we think and so is the sea, we do not know a lot about, Take care. Roy. (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2006 1:33:00 PM)


    Nicely put. The ending is exquisite. Was expecting something else - nice surprise. (Report) Reply

  • (6/10/2006 8:53:00 PM)


    Dee, sometimes we must reach for the unknown but carefully excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Brian Dorn (6/4/2006 5:57:00 PM)


    Dee, neither would I be so bold, ... but I often wonder the same things. It's amazing to think of what we've discovered in space but how little we know about the depths of the ocean. Excellent write! !
    Brian
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  • (5/28/2006 9:57:00 AM)


    Lady Dee
    Boldly going where only hearts can follow, beautiful coral of words
    Love Duncan X
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/18/2006 4:22:00 PM)


    WELL CRAFTED, DEE...CRISPED STRUCTURE...RHYME IN TIME...DOVETAIL
    FLUX... '' BENEATH THE OCEAN'' SURFACES WITH A PERFECT 10 RATING!

    '''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/8/2006 4:46:00 PM)


    We know very little about our ocean depths, but it's fun to wonder what is there. I keep hoping that someone will find something huge and monsterous for us to marvel at, but that's just me. (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2006 12:08:00 PM)


    nice one!
    i too wonder the same...
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  • (5/8/2006 11:37:00 AM)


    Oh, this poem brings back my old dreams of oceanography, Jacques Cousteau my hero! Love '...in depths of mariners' legends'. The last frontier, our beautiful seas. Thanks for this. : ] (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2006 11:25:00 AM)


    she lives beneath the sea:
    prisoner of pirates
    prisoner of dreams!
    nice write- oh how i love the ocean & marvel over what creatures must live in those dark depths!
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