Beneath The Ocean - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Diane Violet (11/3/2009 9:44:00 AM)

I miss the ocean but as for going into the deep I think I'll imagine along with you! Wildly imaginative poem Dee! (Report) Reply

Yelena M. (3/18/2009 6:52:00 AM)

As if I drowned into the ocean depth reading your poem :) Very imaginative! Even if I am not that bold, too :) (Report) Reply

Saint Cynosure (8/19/2008 4:05:00 PM)

And another...I love it, I love it. (Report) Reply

Shelley L Baxter-stanley (4/2/2007 3:21:00 PM)

I loved your poem and the description you created so well from beginning to end! i FELT as though I was there and I could feel the cold dark waters and I was SCARED of what was going to pop out next ((Smile)) Also I loved how you added humor to the end of your poem as it made me laugh and relate to your statement 'I am not that BOLD.'
Keep up the good work.
Shelley (Report) Reply

Not a member No 4 (1/27/2007 5:02:00 PM)

If the measure of a poem is it's ability to draw the reader into its world then this must surely be a good poem. You had me down there looking about and imagining all sorts of madness. More good work. xx (Report) Reply

Melvina Germain (1/21/2007 3:42:00 AM)

I like this one also Dee, it has nice flow, good rhyme and wonderful imagry. You brought me into the poem, I can picture myself beneath the water looking in the dark wondrous ocean.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

Careful with that dogma, my karma might hit it . (10/26/2006 8:57:00 AM)

Wondrous. Those unknown depths never fail to fire the imagination.
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Ruby Root (9/27/2006 7:06:00 AM)

Hi Dee, Beautiful poem. I really like this. It sounds fun. I have never done diving. I don't know if I would be brave enough. Take care. Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

Roy Storey (7/12/2006 9:38:00 AM)

This world is a lot biger then we think and so is the sea, we do not know a lot about, Take care. Roy. (Report) Reply

nn mn (6/16/2006 1:33:00 PM)

Nicely put. The ending is exquisite. Was expecting something else - nice surprise. (Report) Reply

Geoff Warden (6/10/2006 8:53:00 PM)

Dee, sometimes we must reach for the unknown but carefully excellent write (Report) Reply

Brian Dorn (6/4/2006 5:57:00 PM)

Dee, neither would I be so bold, ... but I often wonder the same things. It's amazing to think of what we've discovered in space but how little we know about the depths of the ocean. Excellent write! !
Brian (Report) Reply

Duncan Wyllie (5/28/2006 9:57:00 AM)

Lady Dee
Boldly going where only hearts can follow, beautiful coral of words
Love Duncan X (Report) Reply

Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/18/2006 4:22:00 PM)

WELL CRAFTED, DEE...CRISPED STRUCTURE...RHYME IN TIME...DOVETAIL
FLUX... '' BENEATH THE OCEAN'' SURFACES WITH A PERFECT 10 RATING!

'''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' (Report) Reply

Edwin Robinette (5/8/2006 4:46:00 PM)

We know very little about our ocean depths, but it's fun to wonder what is there. I keep hoping that someone will find something huge and monsterous for us to marvel at, but that's just me. (Report) Reply

Preeti - is here! (5/8/2006 12:08:00 PM)

nice one!
i too wonder the same... (Report) Reply

Esther Leclerc (5/8/2006 11:37:00 AM)

Oh, this poem brings back my old dreams of oceanography, Jacques Cousteau my hero! Love '...in depths of mariners' legends'. The last frontier, our beautiful seas. Thanks for this. : ] (Report) Reply

Goldy Locks (5/8/2006 11:25:00 AM)

she lives beneath the sea:
prisoner of pirates
prisoner of dreams!
nice write- oh how i love the ocean & marvel over what creatures must live in those dark depths! (Report) Reply