Thursday, July 19, 2012

*betrayal Comments

Rating: 2.5

Between us
Strong bond
Still she belittles me
When I go far away long.

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Abdul Wahab
COMMENTS
Vipins Puthooran 15 August 2013

the feel is very much appreciated! ! ! Good write! ! !

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Heather Wilkins 21 November 2012

you love her, yet she betrays you, still you love her.

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Meena Mustafa 29 July 2012

Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

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Queeny Gona 24 July 2012

You wanna stand for her at the same place just to say that you don't care her now. Yet her eyes catch your intention. That's great.

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