Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 92,599 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Bets Then...Were Off - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I bet when you came,
You did not expect this.
I can see it in your eyes.
You lick your lips...
As you tremble!

I bet when you came,
You did not expect this?
Exposing myself,
With direct comments.
Saying that I wish,
We would undress,
And have sex!

I bet when you came,
You did not expect this?
But you did expect something.
I saw that hot and wanting to be bothered look,
Immediately.

'I bet when I came,
You did not expect to see me like this,
At all? ' She said.

And I could say nothing,
Since all bets then...were off!


Comments about Bets Then...Were Off by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (9/29/2007 12:18:00 PM)

    Wow! Burn and sizzle! Not what I expected when I keyed in on THIS one...but, well, I suppose - - All bets were off! ! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011


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