Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Bird Fraught Comments

Rating: 4.5
Bird fraught with anger,
Sailing fury through skies -
The sway of provocative treetops,

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Stug Jordan
COMMENTS
Original Unknown Girl 30 March 2007
Stug, is this a little brother piece for my In flight? Like how you described this, great imagery, especially like the last stanza. My snowy owl has something similar, sometimes birds have a fish-like quality to them... Great piece. HG: -) xx
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Chuck Audette 22 March 2007
Not sure what 'Bire Fraught' means... but loved the line about 'that mouth of sea that chews the land on all sides.' Can just picture a rugged little bay to go with that. -chuck
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