Friday, October 18, 2013

Birds Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once again it's warm enough
To watch the pigeons eat.
The little sparrows take the most,
And fly away to feed.


S Holland
Howard Savage 08 June 2016

Hello Sj great poem, y things for you to do still. I am going to review your poems and by during so your numbers will increase putting your name on both the world and the united states popular poet lists see you there soon.

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A sweet springtime song.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 February 2014

A beautiful poem, and a beautiful note. Yes, I do love watching birds. Birds building their nest, laying eggs, feeding their nestlings, and the young fledgelings one day flying away in delight. 'The little sparrows take the most, And fly away to feed.' - True! 'But once again I stand and watch. I guess I always will.' - Good! 10/10 for this beautiful piece!

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Sj Holland 29 October 2013

Thank you, Jesus, Marvin and Pradip, for reading and commenting. I will read one of your poems.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 October 2013

this short lovely poem is more like a song in praise of the beauty of the birds. touched by its warmth.

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

All creatures are blessings from God...appreciating them is appreciating God!

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 26 October 2013

It feels so nice to write poems on birds, they are so beautiful creatures, combined with a very beautiful poem like this, simply so soothing in the senses. A lovely verse.

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