Thursday, October 1, 2009

Bitter- Sweet Symphony Called Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw pearly droplets of tears
Trickling through her green eyes
Who could cause such a pain to her?
To me this logic simply defies

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Ravi Singh
COMMENTS
Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

Such is the bitter – sweet symphony called life With each hurt, we get an experience brand new I am learning this hard way, and I am sure she has begun her learning too An impressive poem.

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Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

this is very realistic and yes, -the people close to us are the people who make us cry the hardest.

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Nalini Hebbar 08 October 2009

we all learn it the hard way...life is tough...and it has to go on...so it's better to learn to live better....great read

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Indira Renganathan 08 October 2009

Last stanza speaks the whole....nice analysis...nice read...thank you

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Preeti Chauhan 01 October 2009

wow ravi..this one is superb..ur understanding of human emotions in commendable...10 for u..as usual!

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Catrina Heart 01 October 2009

Such is the bitter – sweet symphony called life With each hurt, we get an experience brand new I am learning this hard way, and I am sure she has begun her learning too --------- wow what a lovely piece. great read i had! ! ! Thanks................

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Shogunoka Ledesma III 01 October 2009

i like it. Not bad at all.

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