Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Black Ice and Rain Comments

Rating: 4.0
Can I come in? I saw you slip away.
Hors d'oeuvres depress you, don't they? They do me.
And cocktails, jokes … such dutiful abandon.


Michael Donaghy
jc 20 February 2021
This was quite intense. I wish he'd ended up with the girl tho. But this ending fits, sort of.
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Tc 23 December 2020
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jc 20 February 2021
dont be an and denigrate a work somebody obviously put there heart and a good portion of their soul in.
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chris g 13 February 2020
OMGosh! Exquisite! Words fail me, so hard for the spots this poem touches to verbalize. Heart and soul stumble as they try to get the tongue to do justice. Thanks for sharing this here.
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