poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Blasphemy

Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
Emitting smells of long gone corpses
Abandoned for purity
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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/27/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    an angry poem! I liked the content! ! !
    Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
    Emitting smells of long gone corpses-----> you chose the suitable words

    100% right...

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  • Roland Bastien (4/19/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    All Hell breaks loose
    Somebody with empowerment and virgin
    Have to seal the floodgate
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    he already unlocked the west side paradise door
    souls from the transmigrated land paced into the land
    a bright light arised

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  • Francisco R. Albano (4/7/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Striking imagery. Correct the grammatical mistakes and it gets a 10!
    Is English your first language?

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  • Aine Ní Leidhin (3/13/2008 5:55:00 PM)

    Ideology’s desire to make its own canon and perspective the only acceptable choice results in intolerance and persecution as all other perspectives are denounced as heretical or perhaps even evil.
    Kind regards
    Aine

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  • Not The Pilot (3/11/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    i really like the words used. i see it.... good job...

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  • Konye obaji Ori (3/8/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    this is a very celestial poem, i think.....it has powerful diction, tone and apt imagery...so beautifully writen....i read it over and over and i loved it, a lot...Bravo!

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  • ngaio beckngaio beck (3/3/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    More prophecy than poetry.You've certainly 'got it right'.
    Salaam!

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  • rajagopal hrajagopal h (3/1/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    i can understand the agony of the current scenario of spiritualism devoid of love and divinity....great piece

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