Love washes over me
Bliss follows in its steps
Curling around my soul
Just a trace of a kiss
I couldn't help adding another... shout it from the rooftops. Louder than the bonfires.. Its bigger and better! ! xx
You can only hope for the best Fiona... there's always more to come... xx
'Eternity could call unheard'-wonderful. A great poem of love.You once enjoyed my 'Montmartre'.
I wish upon a star that I could have a love like you write aobut here. This is so tender and romantic it just makes the heart melt. Thank you Fi for sharing this delightful poem.
Love & hugs,
Sated as we lie as one
Rachel Ann Butler
Wonderful stuff Fi. Gives a whole new meaning to November the 5th. Bangers, rockets and the like. A definite 15 out of 10.
curled toes and body spasms have never been peened so eloquently. loved the ending, eternity could call unheard. -steve
I knew from the title I would be reading something very special, and hoped it would be passionate and romantic, and guess what! it was all this and more. It was loving and tender and very beautiful
too! 10 love Karin
Talent of writing Romance is surely your Forte...excellent content...Fiery passion of desire..with the gentleness of loving heart x
The wonderful sensuality of this charming and very expressive poem is quite delightful, Fi. You simply excell like virtually no other poet in writing these lovely romantic poems. Carl.
wow fi just wow.../......
This surely must be an 11.
Excellent and the perfect mix of soft and tender and fiery passion.
Bonfires of Desire is a beautiful poem of both passion and tenderness...well done as usual Fi...10+
Fi this breathes passion and reads so very well - I love the final line in which 'eternity could call unheard' - - a tender and warm poem right through..... xx Fay
eternity shall go unheard
for the time acquired a new dimension
seconds dont want to move
minutes no longer are in procession
the time, the moment and the spur
Captured, captivated like slave
i lived a lifetime, in the single moment you gave....
Pls read magnets, which is incidently in top 500 poems.
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