Thursday, August 13, 2009

Bonfires Of Desire Comments

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Love washes over me
Bliss follows in its steps
Curling around my soul
Just a trace of a kiss


Fiona Davidson
Premila Patel 30 May 2015

I couldn't help adding another... shout it from the rooftops. Louder than the bonfires.. Its bigger and better! ! xx

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Premila Patel 18 May 2015

You can only hope for the best Fiona... there's always more to come... xx

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Matt Mooney 16 April 2010

'Eternity could call unheard'-wonderful. A great poem of love.You once enjoyed my 'Montmartre'.

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Barbara Terry 29 March 2010

I wish upon a star that I could have a love like you write aobut here. This is so tender and romantic it just makes the heart melt. Thank you Fi for sharing this delightful poem. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

Sated as we lie as one Rachel Ann Butler

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Stephen Stirk 27 August 2009

Wonderful stuff Fi. Gives a whole new meaning to November the 5th. Bangers, rockets and the like. A definite 15 out of 10. Best Regards Steve

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Stephen Magill 19 August 2009

curled toes and body spasms have never been peened so eloquently. loved the ending, eternity could call unheard. -steve

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I knew from the title I would be reading something very special, and hoped it would be passionate and romantic, and guess what! it was all this and more. It was loving and tender and very beautiful too! 10 love Karin

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Sue Sie 14 August 2009

Talent of writing Romance is surely your Forte...excellent content...Fiery passion of desire..with the gentleness of loving heart x Sue

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Carl Harris 13 August 2009

The wonderful sensuality of this charming and very expressive poem is quite delightful, Fi. You simply excell like virtually no other poet in writing these lovely romantic poems. Carl.

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Carol Gall 13 August 2009

wow fi just wow.../......

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Herbert Nehrlich2 13 August 2009

This surely must be an 11. Excellent and the perfect mix of soft and tender and fiery passion. Hx

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Sandra Martyres 13 August 2009

Bonfires of Desire is a beautiful poem of both passion and tenderness...well done as usual Fi...10+

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Fay Slimm 13 August 2009

Fi this breathes passion and reads so very well - I love the final line in which 'eternity could call unheard' - - a tender and warm poem right through..... xx Fay

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Nikunj Sharma 13 August 2009

eternity shall go unheard for the time acquired a new dimension seconds dont want to move minutes no longer are in procession the time, the moment and the spur Captured, captivated like slave i lived a lifetime, in the single moment you gave.... Pls read magnets, which is incidently in top 500 poems.

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