Thursday, August 20, 2009

Boredom Comments

Rating: 4.9

You will feel boredom
Even if u reach stardom
Is there any sense or wisdom?
If there is restriction and no freedom

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
COMMENTS

Yes, we are bored because we have too much freedom and, on other occasions, just the opposite lol. It's hard to please oneself.

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Anthony Feghaly 15 October 2009

very intresting i like this poem

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

thank you..................

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Please favor me reading my new posts. Ms.N

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

‘Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain…’ Like tasteful new recipe thro’ wise thoughts with ingredients of words. Great learning Sir. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sachin Goswami 13 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom?

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Sagarika Shah 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom..........10

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Twinkle Vohra 03 September 2009

You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom............10

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 02 September 2009

Our vision widens the horizon.If we get engrossed into routines, growth eludes us. Our purpose should be to reach the ultimate objective and ignore small routines, otherwise boredom is bound to come.

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Mystic Indian 01 September 2009

intelligent rhyme, simple and vivid wit, taste remains in the mind, like a good coffee, long after you've had it. :) 10/10. Way to go Mister!

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Hema Ravi 01 September 2009

High rise or fame is matter of essence You may feel rightly with HIS presence All names and honour may be useless in his absence False stardom or freedom may have no sense These words sum it all! Inspiring words to the reader.

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Doha Ewiess 01 September 2009

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek Look so powerful and not to look weak Almighty may help to achieve the goal As diamonds are dug from thick black coal this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :) I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! !

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Doha Ewiess 01 September 2009

Nothing to hide and nothing to seek Look so powerful and not to look weak Almighty may help to achieve the goal As diamonds are dug from thick black coal this is the most stanza i liked...and in general, your poem is very meaningfull...and the rhyme is so nice...great interesting work friend :) I wish to get rid of the boredom i feel during vacations...lol! !

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Angelic Warrior 31 August 2009

well that's one way to get rid of boredom.....interesting write....i'm sure that stars get bored....but hey they can just buy something to entertain them......though material matter is only amusing for a short while.....good write

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Omar Ibrahim 30 August 2009

you are an incredible poet please teach me how you write! ! ! ! ? ? ? thanks alot for letting me read this piece......i like your poetry very much and i hope i can write like you one day...

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2009

'You will feel boredom Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restriction and no freedom' That's great write. The poem is very good and the rhyme is great. Thanks for sharing with me

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Merna Ibrahim 29 August 2009

The poem is fantastic and the rhyme is fantastic too...10 Merna

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Edwina K 29 August 2009

Even if u reach stardom Is there any sense or wisdom? If there is restrict.........10

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Sadia Hussain 28 August 2009

Guided by others on important matters Reading on doted line by merely looking at letters....10

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Ramdulari Sinha 28 August 2009

Individuality will be on vane Total eclipse on thoughts and on brain...........10

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