Borer-Worms Poem by Rod M.Peters

Borer-Worms

Rating: 5.0


I tip the crystal goblet of my soul
And pour out the water of mercy
But it cuts like exploding shrapnel
The parched face of the thirsty.

I take off my warm overcoat
Wrap it ‘round the bones of Humanity
But the skeleton whips out a dagger
And stabs me with insanity.

I bring a slice of unleavened bread
Close to a toothless mouth agape
But there spring rows of sharp teeth
That bite me, as were I a sweet grape.

I make out menacing clouds above,
Pale magicians riding gathering-storms,
Their flight unfolding a black shroud,
Their laughter shooting borer-worms.

Wednesday, February 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: evil,insensitivity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 02 February 2019

WHIP UP OR whip out? either way, not very nice. naughty, naughty! very fanciful. a dream? it seems to go from 1 - something YOU do causing harm..TO 2 - things you offer backfiring on you, .. TO 3 - a magical force being playful with worms. bri ' (: p.s. those sharp teeth don't seem grapeful.

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Rod Mendieta 04 February 2019

, you're right again: it's definitely whip out. My, what big eyes you have there!

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Tom Billsborough 23 February 2017

A surreal poem of exhilarating images. Lines three and four are quite outstanding, Rod and the whole first rate. It's going into my favourites' list.

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Rod Mendieta 23 February 2017

Dear Tom: this is what it's all about, knowing that at least one reader will be inspired by one's poems. Makes it all worth the hassle! Thanks for dropping by and feel free to come back anytime... Rod

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Rod M.Peters

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San José, Costa Rica
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