Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 211,916 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Bottom Line (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Reaching around from the back to wipe
Pulling from front to rear with a swipe
But my shoulder's too tight
So I can't do it ‘right'
And I clean in reverse, what's the hype?

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Perhaps the only limerick of its ilk.: -)

Comments about Bottom Line (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • Bri Edwards (3/10/2016 11:30:00 AM)

    i arrived here after reading Brian Mayo's poem (see below) on his site. he gave you credit for inspiration.

    i too have toilet poems, but luckily my shoulders still work pretty well. i have sometimes thought about how inconvenient it would be if i lost my wiping arm, OR both arms. i might take the bridge! ! or stop eating.

    bri :) nice advice from your poem. thanks.
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    Kelly Kurt (3/10/2016 1:51:00 PM)

    You could just get someone to hose you off. : -)
    Thanks, Bri

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  • Souren Mondal (2/15/2016 9:12:00 PM)

    Umm, well, okay! ! Thanks for the toilet humour Kelly.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (2/15/2016 11:19:00 PM)

    I never said I wasn't silly. : -)

  • Brian Mayo (2/4/2016 10:19:00 PM)

    The butt-wipe requires finesse
    If it's to be deemed a success
    One slip of the pinky,
    Things get real stinky
    And turn in to an ungodly mess.
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    Kelly Kurt (2/4/2016 10:40:00 PM)

    Excellent, Brian. I hope you post this one.

  • Valsa George (2/2/2016 3:02:00 AM)

    What is handy, just do it..... there is no hard and fast rule as how to do something......! Accomplishing is more important than how one accomplishes! Interesting! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (2/2/2016 3:57:00 AM)

    A different kind of toilet humor. : -)

  • Akhtar Jawad (2/2/2016 2:34:00 AM)

    Sometimes life appears a suit made by an untrained tailor and wearing this suit we become a fun. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (2/2/2016 3:56:00 AM)

    That is the outfit I prefer to wear. : -)
    Thanks, Akhtar

  • Dimitrios Galanis (2/1/2016 4:45:00 PM)

    Your poesy does not lack the humour..A great advantage.But again the the same problem as that with the jokes.That last verse 'deprives' me of the big laugh. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (2/1/2016 8:27:00 PM)

    The lack of a big punch-line, I thought, would be offset by the theme itself

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, February 1, 2016

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