Monday, October 12, 2015

Bread And Wine Comments

Rating: 4.8

Drink this wine for it is his blood.
Eat this bread for it is his body.
Cannibalizing in his name.
We think not of any reason.


Gary Hembree
Kay Staley 27 January 2016

Sarcastic ponderings without knowing what is going on...interesting. Good use of the word cannibalizing as it is very appropriate for the topic. And some people do understand the tradition, but maybe you have to be one of them to know the mystery. This poem could have been more offending and compelling, but maybe the author did us a favor by shrugging the message off as his own opinion in a very cleverly disguised way.

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Noreen Carden 04 November 2015

Good work Gary enjoyed the read

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Hazel Durham 26 October 2015

Yes it is a bizarre custom, a very well written poem!

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* Sunprincess * 15 October 2015

.....wonderful poem, still I wonder who started this practice and when it first began ?

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Rahman Henry 12 October 2015

Lovely poem, indeed, nicely penned.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 October 2015

doctors differ, so also life here.

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