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Break-Up - Poem by jjlJaoisio jjdjdj

What happened to our fantasy?
The romance between you and me
I thought it was so meant to be
I guess I was wrong

Our vitals fading faster
No happily ever after
Bid me so long

Like a mudslide flowing
Your weakness is showing
Will there be any slowing?
I don’t think so

The hardest thing to be done
Is to part with someone
I’m telling you no


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  • (6/7/2005 2:46:00 PM)


    It is a good poem...little more work on the last line but still a good one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 29, 2005



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