Thursday, August 9, 2007

Break-Up Comments

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Why do we do it? Why do we put ourselves through it?
I guess its cause we’re only human we’re all the same
Isn’t it a shame we don’t see it at the start
We only notice at the end but by that time we’re falling apart

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lou lou
COMMENTS
Marvin Brato 15 August 2007
Break up can be useful in time when one falls out of love Lou lou... it is better than to pretend you still love the person because you are treating that person a FOOL. Telling the truth could be painful but it can fade away, rather than lying or keeping it and continue fooling the one you love and YOURSELF too. Life does not stop at breaking up, it may even open to new horizon of finding a true love. Good d write, worth the 10.
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Random Crap 11 August 2007
A really good poem, and so true. Break ups are torture, but rarely actually your fault. Just a tip, try including some punctuation in the longer lines, it could make it read better. eg: - I guess its cause we’re only human, we’re all the same - We only notice at the end, but by that time we’re falling apart - As one begins to tell, the others heart starts to break x-x-x
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