Breath Of Love Poem by anushmadhu Sanna Ratnavel
Breath Of Love
I did not know
In which train you went;
But my deep breath
Brought your train back.
(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)
Brief but complete, and nice. You might want to convert it into a 'Naani' poem (Indian Telugu poem) of 20-25 sylallbles spread in four lines. Your style fits well into that. 10+++++++
If she is your soul mate you can easily reach her with your thoughts and make her come back this must be a spirituel love, otherwise love may be come to an end Nilufer DURSUN
had written my comment earlier; now it's gone. Like this piece a lot, the train went and your thoguhts brought her back and now the wheels of love can roll again, and again, just keep breathing, arushma mark
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/29/2023 9:27:54 AM # 1.0.0.1115
your deep breath brought her train back and she filled the space of your thoughts; yiur eyes met and the train took off again. liked this a lot, anushma mark