anushmadhu P.Bharathi


Breath Of Love - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

I did not know
In which train you went;
But my deep breath
Brought your train back.


(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)


Comments about Breath Of Love by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • (1/15/2010 11:03:00 PM)


    So much meaning in such a brief poem! Touches the heart. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/14/2010 10:22:00 AM)


    Brief, but soul stirring (Report) Reply

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (1/1/2010 12:05:00 AM)


    Brief but complete, and nice. You might want to convert it into a 'Naani' poem (Indian Telugu poem) of 20-25 sylallbles spread in four lines. Your style fits well into that.
    10+++++++
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  • (12/30/2009 1:44:00 PM)


    If she is your soul mate you can easily reach her with your thoughts and make her come back this must be a spirituel love, otherwise love may be come to an end

    Nilufer DURSUN
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  • Mark Nwagwu (12/29/2009 2:41:00 AM)


    had written my comment earlier; now it's gone. Like this piece a lot, the train went and your thoguhts brought her back and now the wheels of love can roll again, and again, just keep breathing, arushma
    mark
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  • Mark Nwagwu (12/29/2009 2:33:00 AM)


    your deep breath brought her train back and she filled the space of your thoughts; yiur eyes met and the train took off again. liked this a lot, anushma
    mark
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 25, 2009


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