Breath Of Love Poem by anushmadhu Sanna Ratnavel

Breath Of Love

Rating: 2.8

I did not know
In which train you went;
But my deep breath
Brought your train back.

(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)

Mark Nwagwu 29 December 2009

your deep breath brought her train back and she filled the space of your thoughts; yiur eyes met and the train took off again. liked this a lot, anushma mark

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Kelly Aragon 15 January 2010

So much meaning in such a brief poem! Touches the heart.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 January 2010

Brief, but soul stirring

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 01 January 2010

Brief but complete, and nice. You might want to convert it into a 'Naani' poem (Indian Telugu poem) of 20-25 sylallbles spread in four lines. Your style fits well into that. 10+++++++

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Nilufer Dursun 30 December 2009

If she is your soul mate you can easily reach her with your thoughts and make her come back this must be a spirituel love, otherwise love may be come to an end Nilufer DURSUN

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Mark Nwagwu 29 December 2009

had written my comment earlier; now it's gone. Like this piece a lot, the train went and your thoguhts brought her back and now the wheels of love can roll again, and again, just keep breathing, arushma mark

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