Miss Fairytale

Breathe Eternity

Breathe eternity over me,
With the essence of life
we soar through the heights
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  • Tom J. Mariani (11/28/2007 10:22:00 AM)

    ...and that is what this poems does...: 'interlace clarity with mystery' - - it doesn't matter if it is a spiritual force or two real people that are breathing on each other, your poem goes beyond that for me. You add to my definition of what a poem does: 'enterlace clarity with mystery.'
    Tom

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