Thursday, June 8, 2006

Breathing Place (Yellow Moon) Comments

Rating: 3.4
Yellow moon peeps at me
Behind the shadows of the night.
Rises slow among the leaves,
Spreading eerie yellow light.

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>Starr Williams<
COMMENTS
Halley Lee 30 July 2007
WOW! You're a talented poet. Good work.
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STARR...YOUR METICULI FOR STRUCTURE COORDINATION IS SO TIGHTLY DISCIPLINED....IMAGEWORX IN POISED POITIONING...GREAT WORK ONCE AGAIN, STARR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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Daniel Tyler 20 June 2006
very strongly written and very evocative of the Texan landscape you inhabit.
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Brian Dorn 16 June 2006
Starr, I like how you used the moon to symbolize a need to get far away, beyond the reach of everyone... to the perfect breathing place. Well done! ! Brian
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Patricia Gale 10 June 2006
A splendid piece! You have a great talent Patricia
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Duncan Wyllie 09 June 2006
I think that Sandra says so much about the way I feel towards this poem, it is very skillfully written also Love Duncan X
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Sandra Fowler 08 June 2006
A very wistful poem. We all need that breathing place, but perhaps we find it now and then in the creation of a charming piece such as this one. Warm regards, Sandra
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