Bride Poem by dr. ram sharma

Bride

Rating: 5.0


BRIDE
Tears in the eyes,
Tide in the heart,
A plant,
To be implanted in new orchard,
Sweet dreams,
Memories hard
Plant will grow,
In a huge tree
Responsibilities many,
Personality free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 08 December 2008

Tears in the eyes, tide in the heart- you have captured the turmoil in a bride's mind here. that's what life is change, acceptance and moving on.10 lovely poem Mamta

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Linda Winchell 08 December 2008

Yes Sir Doctor friend, Yes! This is what a Bride should feel like. Ten! ! ! ! Bravo! Linda

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C T Heart 07 December 2008

symbolic composition written in a compact verse. True to be a bride is such an overwhelming feeling that tears escape in our spakling eyes. A new doorway of life to enter with lots of memories to tell later on, as the story of life goes to the end...Wonderful piece.

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