Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 184,204 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Brightly Decorated - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

We witness everyday this bride
With many more jewels she shines
Every East sky adores with songs
Birds gather around to talk sure.

Witnessing is nice as she cries
Withe tear of diamond she touches
Very soft and gentle is her mind
She paints the canvas of eternity.

Having infinite wisdom she flows
From East to West everyday, we see
Again she comes next day we feel
Time passes she comes and goes.

Beautiful princess she comes too
Brightly decorated bride she is
Day welcomes in light new heaven
She writes wisdom to teach us all.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, love and art, morning


Comments about Brightly Decorated by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Souren Mondal (11/14/2015 3:31:00 AM)


    ”Witnessing is nice as she cries
    Withe tear of diamond she touches
    Very soft and gentle is her mind
    She paints the canvas of eternity.”

    Romantic with a capital 'R'.. A free flow of imagination, incredible imagery (particularly the 'tear of diamond) , and great diction. Loved your poem. Thank you for sharing..
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  • Valsa George (11/14/2015 1:19:00 AM)


    Beautiful princess she comes too
    Brightly decorated bride she is
    Day welcomes in light new heaven
    She writes wisdom to teach us all.......... Lovely description of the arrival of the sun! We all enjoy this brightly decorated bride!
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 7:03:00 PM)


    My dear friend, Kumarmani. Your wording is so enjoyable. I can only assume that in your native tongue, it is even more so. The insights I get from the way you write is appreciated. You are a thoughtful and loving man. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (11/13/2015 6:24:00 PM)


    Oh what a heavenly love song you have sung! To quote a few lines- - -
    We witness every day this bride
    With many more jewels she shines
    Every east sky adores with songs
    Birds talks around to talk sure
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015



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