Broken Heart Poem by Chrishtiana Reed
Broken Heart
For the first time in a long time, it's hit me;
All the pain and heartache,
All the scars and scratches,
All the cuts and bruises,
All the tears that have fallen from my eyes,
All the tissues that have been used to dry those tears.
For the first time in a long time, it's hit me;
That each time i have loved all i have gotten is pain and saddness.
As i lay in my bed, i think; i think of what i have done to deserve this,
But yet nothing comes to mind,
As i lay in my bed, i close my eyes to think of what i could have done right,
But all i see is my heart then a flame.
I open my eyes to see if its nothing but a dream,
I take a deep breath but a pain goes through my chest.
I close my eyes and all i see is a pile of ash whare my heart used to
be.
I open my eyes to see black smoke surrounding me.
As i look around, i see that the smoke is coming from whare my heart used to be.
I have given my heart out piece by piece, inch by inch
And for the first time in a long time, it's hit me; Now i have no heart left to give.
that'z talent there, and some raw emotion. XC i know it hurts, but its the best art work in the world, the art of the hurting, downcast, and broken.
raelly good.Nice to read and the concluding part is better. i like it very much dude...
well i like it and it is what you feal its more than a good read its a heart in word form and even thow you are hurt all pple come from dirt so there for alot of love just wont work
I close my eyes and all i see is a pile of ash whare my heart used to be. I open my eyes to see black smoke surrounding me....... really strong and painful emotional outburst......there is something haunting in your poetry.......
wow.............................these lines are so lovely.......its like you have written them using your heart.......its just so much beauty into it..great Job
Don't give up on love. the day will come, when you will finally meet the right person for you. This person will be the one who will never leave you. Don't stop writing. Your poems are really good.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 1:53:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well, you have nicely expressed your feeling here. But I like the conclusion part more than the starting part. Keep it up. Well done.