Monday, February 26, 2007

Broken Marriage Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is broken you've seemed to have gone away
Even though you've always promised you'd stay
We've been together for ever so long
Now I know what to do I've got to be strong

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Bonnie B Long
COMMENTS
Geoff Warden 26 February 2007

Emotionally Touching, the flow is as should be, this be a fine write and well versed with all emotional tact. Well Done.

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