Broken Tree - Poem by Martine Kolber

So where do you hide my love
When your are too afraid to breath
And no movements can be done
Cause you are broken inside


what a sweet poem is this one...really impressive.i wrote also one of my poems unfer the same title but different way... i liked this poem very much 10/10 (Report)Reply

lovely piece...the feel u presented is simply good and genuine..and the last two lines re simply beautiful.. (Report)Reply

'You go with the wind to finally be free
You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree'

I love these lines most, wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

Yet another fine example of your talent....lovely written piece


Thanks for sharing

best wishes
Jon (Report)Reply

I can just repeat it one more time- I'm your fan! Impressive (Report)Reply

oh my..it touches my heart.....just like when my friend told me this...go wd d wind, a hurricane..you will be........keep on writing...keep on inspiring brokem hearted people (Report)Reply

Very romantic poetry Martine, it gives hope to a brokenhearted soul, worth the 10. Great write my friend. (Report)Reply