Martine Kolber

Rookie - 0 Points (02 October 1983 / Luxembourg)

Broken Tree - Poem by Martine Kolber

So where do you go my love
When angry tears flow down
Your lovely cheeks and fall
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  • (2/17/2010 5:29:00 AM)

    So where do you hide my love
    When your are too afraid to breath
    And no movements can be done
    Cause you are broken inside


    what a sweet poem is this one...really impressive.i wrote also one of my poems unfer the same title but different way... i liked this poem very much 10/10
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  • (5/30/2009 6:47:00 PM)

    lovely piece...the feel u presented is simply good and genuine..and the last two lines re simply beautiful.. (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/21/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    'You go with the wind to finally be free
    You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree'

    I love these lines most, wonderful poem.
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  • (6/27/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    Yet another fine example of your talent....lovely written piece


    Thanks for sharing

    best wishes
    Jon
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  • (6/6/2007 6:29:00 AM)

    I can just repeat it one more time- I'm your fan! Impressive (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2007 6:14:00 AM)

    oh my..it touches my heart.....just like when my friend told me this...go wd d wind, a hurricane..you will be........keep on writing...keep on inspiring brokem hearted people (Report)Reply

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  • (5/31/2007 4:49:00 AM)

    Very romantic poetry Martine, it gives hope to a brokenhearted soul, worth the 10. Great write my friend. (Report)Reply

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