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Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Broken Up With Comments

Rating: 4.1
My life has ended two days ago
when you allowed your heart to someone else go
what a fool i am, i still love you although
you`ve left me without thinking what you me owe

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Tareq Jalabi
COMMENTS
Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010
because i am going where love does not last? -> please let me know if you ever find that place...
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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 22 November 2009
Very good, you picked the right words that describe your silent despair... Are you cold blooded? I am.
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Sherri Coulter 12 September 2009
ohhh, the pain, when with thunder comes rain. good write 10+
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Riya Riska 05 June 2009
Ough... Blue..as your eyes..
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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009
very sweet it's silent to me compared to your other poems but I really do like this one
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Kelsey Tennant 08 January 2009
oh my goodness thats exactly how i feel right now! ! ! thats AMAZING! ! !
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anne adam 01 January 2009
it seem that iam not the only one who's in love lol but i really like it, keep it up
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008
Vow! Great write! I enjoy it!
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Jennifer Sollmann 30 December 2008
i love the last line! 'gone to a place where love does not go' it's simply beautiful.: ]
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Hailie Workman 28 December 2008
i love it. its so emotional and deep. nice!
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Miriam Maia Padua 23 December 2008
beautifully written....very touching....this is very painful i guess....nice poem...written from deep within..all emotions are being poured out...accepting the bitterness and the moving on........10+++++... MERRY CHRISTMAS......
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Naru Kaede 03 December 2008
Huhuhuhuhu, , so sad, , it's too much pain, I feel that too when I broke up with my boyfriends, and that's too much hurt, , This is a nice poem, , (^_^) Naru Kaede, ,
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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008
personal? ? this is really a great piece..
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Kallie Madison 20 November 2008
Your poem is good, I love it...........well I love it so much
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Liliana Negoi 05 August 2008
vividly expressed feeling, but i'd work on the structure some more...it feels like you're trying to express too much in too few words
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Shruti Modi 30 July 2008
i can connect to it....ive been thru sumhing similar... it comes right frm ur heart and touches right into my heart....
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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 July 2008
Words came out from heart! ....mind-blowing! well done.
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Francesca Lam 17 July 2008
It's kinda sad~ but i like it~
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Mohammad Al-kurdi 25 June 2008
nice rhime as always fine I see a broken love which is not mine cuz there will be hope this time........... go ahead...
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Bianca B. 20 June 2008
I like it it expresses your feelings
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