Jez C Brul

Broomstick(Haiku 22) - Poem by Jez C Brul

A single broomstick
cannot sweep all the dry leaves
along the church yard.

Topic(s) of this poem: unity

Form: Haiku

Comments about Broomstick(Haiku 22) by Jez C Brul

  • Robert Murray Smith (6/22/2018 11:41:00 PM)

    An imaginative write. Many interpretations.++10 (Report) Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (5/2/2018 11:19:00 PM)

    Not only from church
    But also from anywhere, ...... interesting, thanks for sharing 10
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  • Michael Walker (4/29/2018 6:59:00 PM)

    A very tidy haiku, a snapshot of a churchyard with dry leaves on it: it
    could be tidier. More than one broomstick is needed.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/29/2018 4:22:00 PM)

    You are very true. Single broomstick cannot wash out may dried leaves fallen from trees. Unity is strength. This poem is humorously and metaphorically expressed. Revisiting this poem values more. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (4/29/2018 7:49:00 AM)

    So true, unity is a powerful force, great example and a creative write! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/27/2018 1:12:00 PM)

    It is abeautiful poem on unity in concise with a nice theme. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/24/2018 11:28:00 PM)

    There is a limit for what a single person can do or achieve, but there is no limit if a whole group functions together! Collective strength is several times greater than individual strength! You have emphasized the point with a beatuiful example! Great Haiku, Jez! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Williams (4/23/2018 2:04:00 AM)

    Wisdom in a capsule! ! ! ! The very definition of Haiku. Concise and incisive! ! ! Haiku and you are a very good fit! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/22/2018 12:40:00 AM)

    Dear Jez, such a very powerful haiku to urge the Binhi Organization to be united in a clean-up drive activity today the world over.....10++++++ (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (4/22/2018 1:08:00 AM)

    😊🙂😊 dear poet Bro. Bernard, together we are one..👍👍👍thanks a bunch🙂🙂🙃

  • Ravi Sathasivam (4/21/2018 11:27:00 PM)

    A thoughtful write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Carl Roussell (4/21/2018 4:54:00 PM)

    A good poem on getting along with one another. (Report) Reply

  • Rini Shibu (4/21/2018 4:44:00 PM)

    A thought provoking poem..well penned (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/21/2018 2:58:00 PM)

    Peace and love to all mankind! Unity is the key.
    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Drtony Brahmin (4/21/2018 10:46:00 AM)

    liked the unity idea. in such a short poem you have packed up so much dear Jez.. thanku. tony (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 21, 2018

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 21, 2018

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