Poetic Poet


Built Of Nothing - Poem by Poetic Poet

Every word floating and bloated
Cannot revive what never existed.

Existence so persistently pursued
Where there is no colour, no flowers.

Devoured by faith nothing is nothing
To be is more than a fantasy of dreams.

Built of nothing it will not float
Only in the seas of fantastical minds.

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Comments about Built Of Nothing by Poetic Poet

  • (12/9/2019 3:49:00 AM)

    A Hearty Belated Congrats on Poem Of The Day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You are not only a darn good poet, but also, a pretty decent philosopher. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (12/8/2019 8:31:00 PM)

    A great poem my friend! Scintillating poetic expression... extremely well penned! My great pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again! (Report)Reply

    (12/9/2019 4:12:00 AM)

    Thank your Sir, kindly.

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  • Sankaran Ayya (12/7/2019 6:30:00 AM)

    To be is more than a fantasy of dreams.
    yes nicely said
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    (12/9/2019 4:11:00 AM)

    Thank you profusely for your comment.

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  • Bernard Snyder (12/2/2019 11:14:00 PM)

    Nicely written. Such a beautiful expression. Well done. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 11:39:00 PM)

    Thank you kindly.

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  • (12/2/2019 10:12:00 PM)

    Between fantasy and existence. Congratulations PP (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 10:40:00 PM)

    Thank you all for your kindness.

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (12/2/2019 9:38:00 PM)

    A poem of great depth.
    Eight brilliant lines that are thought
    provoking.
    Yes, words without basis sail without destination.
    Yet, sometimes words have their own wings
    and make us soar
    enable us to touch and see what is beyond.
    A beautifully crafted and well executed write.
    Congratulations for a well deserved accolade.
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    (12/2/2019 10:13:00 PM)

    A wonderful comment. Gratefully accepted.

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/2/2019 8:46:00 PM)

    Beautiful write. Congrats. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 9:21:00 PM)

    A welcome comment.

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (12/2/2019 8:40:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem my friend! I congratulate you once again! Stay always happy and sing delightfully! ! (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 9:21:00 PM)

    Kindness is a flower to show. Thank you.

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  • Aqua Flower (12/2/2019 7:51:00 PM)

    Fascinating write. Congratulations on your poem being selected Poem of the day! (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 9:20:00 PM)

    Thank you Aqua Flower.

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  • Shaun Cronick (12/2/2019 4:18:00 PM)

    Warmest salutations to your good self for your sublime poem being chosen for Poem of the Day. Well done and richly deserved. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 6:58:00 PM)

    Thank you Shaun.

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  • Lyn Paul (12/2/2019 3:28:00 PM)

    Penned beautifully. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 6:59:00 PM)

    Greetings Lyn and thanks.

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  • Kostas Lagos (12/2/2019 2:00:00 PM)

    Hats off my Poetic friend! Congratulations (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 6:59:00 PM)

    My hat off to you, too.

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  • (12/2/2019 1:21:00 PM)

    Congratulations on the Poem of the Day. Your verse reminds me of the hunt, the pursuit that any writer may encounter while tracking that so perfect, yet elusive, phrase or word....or...language fails me. So well done, Poet! (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 7:00:00 PM)

    Mj your comments are appreciated.

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  • Bri Edwards (12/2/2019 12:46:00 PM)

    I rarely pay any attention to announcements of Poems of the Day, and when i have, i'm often, if not usually, disappointed. but this one i actually like!

    i was about to write that this author is on my Banned List of members, ....BUT s/he is not (yet!) . the banned member is Poet Poet, not Poetic Poet! ! !

    to MyPoemList.

    bri

    :)
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    (12/2/2019 7:01:00 PM)

    Glad you visited.

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  • (12/2/2019 12:31:00 PM)

    On the flip side...nothing would well argue that we that exist are bloated imaginations built on imaginary seas of wishful thinking, for nothing cannot explain what it does not know, therefore it keeps it’s nothing of a mind closed, so many times we hear what has been discovered proclaim...here I am...now what? Philosophies within philosophies, congratulations on poem of the day! (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 7:03:00 PM)

    So pleased to receive your comment.

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/2/2019 11:00:00 AM)

    Existence! ! ! Colours! Minds on earth.


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    (12/2/2019 7:05:00 PM)

    A great comment, Edward.

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  • Denis Mair (12/2/2019 10:35:00 AM)

    I hope that faith has a strong enough stomach to devour nothing. Our lives are stretched over the void like gossamer...perhaps words of faith can help us feel somewhat at home in such a predicament. Thank you for your though-provoking write. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 7:05:00 PM)

    Great comment, Denis.

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  • Rajnish Manga (12/2/2019 9:30:00 AM)

    Truth revealed through thoughtful abstract images brings about the philosophy of life. Thanks & Congrats. (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 7:07:00 PM)

    Rajnish, thank you, indeed!

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  • Chinedu Dike (12/2/2019 7:23:00 AM)

    An insightful piece of poetry written with in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful work of art.
    Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
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    (12/2/2019 7:07:00 PM)

    A thoughtful comment.

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  • Chan Mongol (12/2/2019 7:21:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a great theme. A graded ___+19 (Report)Reply

    (12/2/2019 7:08:00 PM)

    Chan, your comment smiled.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 23, 2019



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