Mark R Slaughter

But Don'T Despair - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

Despair, if you must –
But how's it going to pull you through?
Despair, when you trust
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  • (4/18/2009 8:59:00 PM)

    Your advice is exemplary. Your poem is well structured with a real feel for rhyme and rhythm. Your conclusion is spot on. Definitely worth a second read. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (4/16/2009 2:34:00 AM)

    So give to others - give them all a helping lift:
    Despair, you'll find will disappear -
    And that has got to be a well-deserved
    And saintly gift!

    You have conveyed a very bright message in this well worded poem. A saintly gift indeed..........10.
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  • Concetta Neville (4/15/2009 4:08:00 PM)

    I Greatly agree with this poem. Well done.10 + (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2009 4:04:00 PM)

    Nice uplifting poem Mark, others problems can make our own look small,
    Lynda xx
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