Friday, July 9, 2010
Calendar, Dedicated To My Poetiwife Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Just like the location of the moon in the sky,
The papers of the calendar in my life get to fly
When the word “moon” loses its first two syllables,
“on” becomes into a body, coming before all day-babbles
The papers of the calendar in my life get to fly
When the word “moon” loses its first two syllables,
“on” becomes into a body, coming before all day-babbles
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Okan Emanet
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
10 July 2010
What a beautiful dedication! Loved the poetic play of words. Lovely! ; D
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Hans Vr
10 July 2010
Wow, Okan, fantastic poem, full of feeling with wonderfull images and wordplays. The woman can be so proud to have you as her man. I really enjoyed reading the poem, then read it again and then once more before writing the comment. Yousday is a wonderful find. Keep it up, keep writing this kind of top-poetry.
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