Friday, December 15, 2006

Can'T Comments

Rating: 4.5
How do you reckon
With, I can't do it anymore
Sit down and cry
Lament and moan all those Cans

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shimon weinroth
COMMENTS
Nathan Pait 15 December 2006
Well written. I get lost in there without punctuation, though. You may want to put 'I can't anymore' in quotes, because the rest of the poem is a more formal style.
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