Saturday, July 12, 2008

Cell Phone Poem Comments

Rating: 3.0
I have no space,
have so much time,
out of the race
(meter and rhyme) .


Edgardo Tugade
Bernard Snyder 17 October 2014
Very creative, Edgardo! Nice poem. Also, congrats on your poem being chosen as 'poem of the day'. Great honor and well-deserved!
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John Richter 17 October 2014
Short, to the point, and perfect cadence.... We often need brief little dalliances such as this abrupt array of words from time to time in order to cleanse the mind's palette.... Enjoyable read...
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Leslie Philibert 17 October 2014
great idea, this races along...
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Babatunde Aremu 17 October 2014
Time is insatiable. We are in want of more constantly. nice thought. kudos to you, Edgardo
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Soulful Heart 17 October 2014
enough time but no space...............simple words that carry so much of implications and observations......brilliant
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Rajesh.c Bose 17 October 2014
what a wonderful creation!
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Babatunde Aremu 19 October 2012
What a good poem! You demonssrated well how a poet use ordinary things to express good messages. Great write
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 October 2012
Delightful read, Edgardo, aware that there is not indeed enough space in a cell phone for more and more verses.
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Manonton Dalan 17 October 2012
kumusta na diyan kabayan?
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Joshua Whiting 31 October 2009
Neat concept of a cell phone poem. Hope you'll take the time to check out my poem, Cell Phone Junkies - Drugless Addiction. Thanks! Joshua C.
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Janri Gogeshvili 11 August 2008
In an original way, involves accent of internal dynamism … 10
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Greenwolfe 1962 16 July 2008
This was a nice two verse poem. I love to read them because of creativity. GW62
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Chitra - 12 July 2008
a interesting write!
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