Saturday, May 17, 2008

* Charleston’s Salt Flats (Couplets) .* Comments

Rating: 2.9
Periwinkle dusk cradled in meringue-d moon -
Beams with tinged sun-drops each echoing its own

Crooning –love for day’s sweet end, far-flung skinny oaks


Debora Short
Barry A. Lanier 15 August 2008
I enjoyed the melody and metaphor and especially the unorthodox style very unique, , , ,
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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2008
How cleverly you've structured this one. The couplets enhance the flow of the piece and the salty tang that seems somehow to sneak between your words. Stylish, lyrical penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Raynette Eitel 19 May 2008
This is just lovely, Debora, all ' tendrilled and ribboned' like the South. Raynette
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