Kumarmani Mahakul

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Charming Face Speaks - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Having this dawn it paints
Like snow on face is cream,
Beauty is increased in time
All like her charming face.

Very lovely is East sky mist
Creating vow of beauty it sees
This transfers touch of rays
Little melting on snow is tear.

This tear flows in happiness
As morning bride gets ready
To go to her in-laws's home
With love they take welcoming.

With newly married sun groom
This bride travels in chariot
In brightness with sun she goes
Charming dazzling face speaks.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love and art, morning


Comments about Charming Face Speaks by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Terry Craddock (11/21/2015 7:41:00 PM)


    Bride Wedding Day Dreams

    journey's potential
    vibrant radiant
    in love honoured

    with new life
    hope dreams symbolic
    in a young bride

    first journey
    to love vow
    new husband's

    in-laws home
    home of cyclic
    birth in hopes

    desiring
    blessing
    new generation

    when blessing
    birth is bestowed
    upon future

    first time parents


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Charming Face Speaks' by Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/18/2015 8:43:00 PM)


    Being Inspired by Kunarmani Mahakul's poem Charming Face Speaks

    Charming dazzling face speaks,
    and it never speaks a lie,
    it translates the heart,
    an amazing place,
    where goodness and badness live together,
    like good neighbors,
    I am surprised and I often ask myself,
    how it's so and why it's so,
    the answer less question increases,
    whiteness of my semi white beard,
    I know if i live and think any more,
    my beard will become completely white,
    it will hide my speaking face,
    and the face will be silent to listen to reply,
    Alas! My face will make repeated efforts,
    to let the others know the reply of petition,
    from a defendant,
    who is an accused,
    and Chief Justice as well,
    of the of the highest court!

    Your poem is great, I have been inspired and wrote the above poem. I am going to submit it at PH........10
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  • Terry Craddock (11/18/2015 3:41:00 PM)


    journey's potential vibrant radiant in love honoured, with new life hope dreams symbolic in a young bride, first journey to love vow new husband's in-laws home, home of cyclic birth in hopes of blessing new generation, when blessing birth is bestowed upon future first time parents (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (11/14/2015 12:22:00 AM)


    Yes, tears also flows in happiness, enjoyed reading, thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015



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