An aching chasm
Forbidding and endless
I could never imagine that a lovely and ever smiling girl like you could write such dreary gloomy lines. I remember those old BJB college days. You were such a nice smiling girl and all of us admired you because your composed character and committement.
I think your poem is incomplete till you add a few lines which gives patience and strength to convert gloom to ecstasy.
Waiting till you complete.
H. P. PAL
Dy. Manager -HR, POWERGRID &
Coordinator - Power HR Forum
Plot No 2, Sector -29, Gurgaon - 122002 (Haryana)
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