Wednesday, September 22, 2004

Chasm Comments

Rating: 5.0

An aching chasm
Forbidding and endless
Separates us...

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Nishma Kapoor
COMMENTS
Hara Prasad Pal 24 March 2007

Hi, I could never imagine that a lovely and ever smiling girl like you could write such dreary gloomy lines. I remember those old BJB college days. You were such a nice smiling girl and all of us admired you because your composed character and committement. I think your poem is incomplete till you add a few lines which gives patience and strength to convert gloom to ecstasy. Waiting till you complete. Yours sincerely H. P. PAL Dy. Manager -HR, POWERGRID & Coordinator - Power HR Forum Plot No 2, Sector -29, Gurgaon - 122002 (Haryana) hppal@hotmail.com

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