Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 172,380 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Child Sun Is Kissing East - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

With very deep love now you see
You see this East sky, feel thee.
Marvelous art work is done in sky
To watch this festival birds fly.

Crying children stop to watch this
Nobody even in old age want to miss.
Mother is ready to serve fresh food
Father says watch scene you be good.

This is very far but near we feel,
Artists like to paint in mind's zeal.
Stars are not willing to far way go,
This is of course a very nice show.

Child sun is coming in chariot mist,
Sun is kissing East giving long list.
Deep love of child sun gives us light
Early love of father makes life bright.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death, morning, nature, spiritual


Comments about Child Sun Is Kissing East by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Hazel Durham (8/21/2016 11:03:00 AM)


    Vivid imagery and a beautiful message in this great write as nature is there every day for us to look and see the great beauty of the sun sweeping across the sky and earth as our passion for life is renewed! (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/24/2016 7:06:00 AM)


    Like to paint in mind's zeal and, to heal the world with the works of peace. Knowing that, one is born and to die. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/5/2015 6:10:00 AM)


    Deep love of child sun gives us light
    Early love of father makes life bright.
    This poem itself is very bright. and the title of the poem very eye catching. carrying a beautiful image.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/5/2015 5:46:00 AM)


    Nicely penned poem, Sun in its early stage is indeed a child sun with vivid colours and as it grows becomes brighter and brighter....Morning description is amusing, Sir. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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