Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 26 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Choir Of Coral - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

with sea breeze
waves gently delight
a calling for exotic dreams
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  • Michael Gale (6/23/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    Greatly done.


    MJG...
    Of the world of poetry.
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  • (5/28/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    nice one! ! ! ! ! i really enjoied it..10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/25/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    deep lines.very touching tribute.wonderfull.posted 10
    surya
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  • (5/24/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    The lines themselves put a smile on my face... great work, sir! 10+++
    MIMI
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  • (5/24/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    a beautiful write and best dedication to a poet........always sea breeze makes exotice dreams....... (Report)Reply

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  • (5/23/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    i just imagine myself in the beach, in the water, great job (Report)Reply

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  • (5/23/2009 3:46:00 PM)

    Very sweet
    good write.................
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  • Luwi Habte (5/23/2009 1:33:00 PM)

    i would love if your poems were in poem order
    some times it looks like talking, not a poem
    at all it is fine
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  • Rajkumar Mukherjee (5/22/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    DEAR SIDDIQUI,
    Let me admit first I hav'nt read a poem of Linda Robson. But she must be good poet and of course I 'll.. it's a poem by some one who has got a great love for the sea. imageries used are good and cool. Thanks-Rajkumar
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  • Indira Renganathan (5/22/2009 5:40:00 AM)

    This piece gives a beechy feeling of tranquility (Report)Reply

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  • (5/22/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    i jsut had a drive along the beach...two distinct shades of gray-dark on the sea, light on the sky and a dazzling summer heat! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/22/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    Pleasant and sweet choir! Great write! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/21/2009 9:00:00 PM)

    fantastic lil poem. i liked the images.. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/21/2009 12:16:00 PM)

    I thought this poem wae very peaceful.(My two brothers were commercial divers.) (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi A (5/21/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    Very poetic. Instead of 'deep', 'depth'. Instead of 'sang', 'sung' (the past participle) . The last lines elevate the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Barry A. Lanier (5/21/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    another imagetic persentation of your love of the sea...and one of the endangered species....an advocacy (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/21/2009 6:53:00 AM)

    It is good that this poem is dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Lynda Robson (Report)Reply

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  • (5/21/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Nice - to bad the coral is dying from pollution. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/21/2009 5:05:00 AM)

    a sensitive poem with good expression...a nice work dear ahmad..naizz (Report)Reply

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  • (5/20/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery and flow! Thanks, roshni. (Report)Reply

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