Marieta Maglas
Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
Sunday, May 17, 2009

Cleopatra Comments

Rating: 4.8
Marieta Maglas
COMMENTS
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 January 2010
i appreciate your view. kindly read my poem Cleopatra's glory. shan
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 January 2010
Yeah it’s true…but Beauty of Cleo…undoubtedly non venomous in eyes of beauty admirers … 10 not for venom…but for beauty of dear Cleo Ms. Nivedita UK
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Braja K Sarkar 29 December 2009
Really wonderful poem...I like this very much..
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Bob Genevro 08 December 2009
Hi Marieta, 'Cleopatra' works well as haiku. I like the gold and asp references because they are two images at opposite ends tugging with each other. Cleopatra still has that animal magnetism that attracts writers and readers. I'm wondering if you're going to keep playing and experimenting with haiku.
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Rahul Aithal 07 December 2009
Wow! short but killing.
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Fergus Condron 20 November 2009
Hi Marieta, You started so well......too short, you could really make this great, remember how she was used by Ceaser, then cast aside by Mark Anthony.....the venomous snakes were the men in her life.....you have a good style but if you sit back and think of the great nation of Egypt and all the pressure on her, you could really make this a tragic poem, you have the skill to do it...why not? I only gave you a 4 this time.....but await you to resubmit or penn a new one? A challenge from me to you.......
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Eyan Desir 10 November 2009
hmmm, nice short but well said
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Ramin Chaman 07 November 2009
a famous queen of Egypt ... Hello Mari a nice poem..and compact.. indeed a good write.. for this 10+ .
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Roy Martinez 30 October 2009
A lifetime story of this beauty in a lifetime of tenacity
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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009
Very short poem, but totally accurate. love it
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Alf Hutchison 29 October 2009
A great topic in so few words... brilliant Regards Alf
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****Hanaring Tamara.. 26 October 2009
a historical beautiful poem..
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Susan Russell 25 October 2009
great job! ! ! i loved that poem.... 10
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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 October 2009
A cute analysis of Cleopatra, in few words.....great.
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Philip Winchester 03 October 2009
Many a true word spoken in but a small sentence. You have nailed it with this one, I sometimes take Five Hundred words to say as much, but can recognise your brevity as true CLASS. Well written and Thanks for your note. Kind Regards Philip
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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009
An interesting write on Cleopatra....you have focussed on her tragic end...good job
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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009
Very short, but totally accurate. love it! ..............
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Oche Babs 27 September 2009
this is the shortest poem i have ever sen. u are good. 7points
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Ivan Kodorkovski 26 September 2009
a beautiful three liner for alady, larger than life, like cleopatra
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Sergio Bruno 26 September 2009
great job! ! ! i loved that poem....keep writing! !
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