Cleopatra - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/9/2010 8:08:00 AM)

i appreciate your view. kindly read my poem Cleopatra's glory. shan (Report) Reply

Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/7/2010 10:53:00 AM)

Yeah it’s true…but Beauty of Cleo…undoubtedly non venomous in eyes of beauty admirers …
10 not for venom…but for beauty of dear Cleo
Ms. Nivedita
UK (Report) Reply

Braja K Sarkar (12/29/2009 6:05:00 AM)

Really wonderful poem...I like this very much.. (Report) Reply

Bob Genevro (12/8/2009 12:22:00 PM)

Hi Marieta,
'Cleopatra' works well as haiku. I like the gold and asp references because they are two images at opposite ends tugging with each other. Cleopatra still has that animal magnetism that attracts writers and readers. I'm wondering if you're going to keep playing and experimenting with haiku. (Report) Reply

Rahul Aithal (12/7/2009 10:44:00 AM)

Wow! short but killing. (Report) Reply

Fergus Condron (11/20/2009 7:45:00 AM)

Hi Marieta,

You started so well......too short, you could really make this great, remember how she was used by Ceaser, then cast aside by Mark Anthony.....the venomous snakes were the men in her life.....you have a good style but if you sit back and think of the great nation of Egypt and all the pressure on her, you could really make this a tragic poem, you have the skill to do it...why not? I only gave you a 4 this time.....but await you to resubmit or penn a new one? A challenge from me to you....... (Report) Reply

Eyan Desir (11/10/2009 5:10:00 PM)

hmmm, nice
short but well said (Report) Reply

Ramin Chaman (11/7/2009 1:57:00 AM)

a famous queen of Egypt


...
Hello Mari

a nice poem..and compact.. indeed a good write..

for this 10+

. (Report) Reply

Roy Martinez (10/30/2009 2:55:00 PM)

A lifetime story of this beauty in a lifetime of tenacity (Report) Reply

Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:35:00 PM)

Very short poem, but totally accurate. love it (Report) Reply

Alf Hutchison (10/29/2009 3:19:00 PM)

A great topic in so few words... brilliant Regards Alf (Report) Reply

****Hanaring Tamara.. (10/26/2009 10:27:00 AM)

a historical beautiful poem.. (Report) Reply

Susan Russell (10/25/2009 12:17:00 PM)

great job! ! ! i loved that poem....
10 (Report) Reply

Sathyanarayana M V S (10/22/2009 10:07:00 PM)

A cute analysis of Cleopatra, in few words.....great. (Report) Reply

Philip Winchester (10/3/2009 4:51:00 AM)

Many a true word spoken in but a small sentence.
You have nailed it with this one, I sometimes take Five
Hundred words to say as much, but can recognise your
brevity as true CLASS.
Well written and Thanks for your note.
Kind Regards
Philip (Report) Reply

Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:31:00 AM)

An interesting write on Cleopatra....you have focussed on her tragic end...good job (Report) Reply

Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 1:25:00 PM)

Very short, but totally accurate. love it! .............. (Report) Reply

Oche Babs (9/27/2009 7:20:00 AM)

this is the shortest poem i have ever sen. u are good. 7points (Report) Reply

Ivan Kodorkovski (9/26/2009 6:02:00 PM)

a beautiful three liner for alady, larger than life, like cleopatra (Report) Reply

Sergio Bruno (9/26/2009 5:47:00 PM)

great job! ! ! i loved that poem....keep writing! ! (Report) Reply