Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 767,225 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Close The Eyes - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We may face onslaught and not survive
If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
Nature may not spare us for committed sin
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  • (10/6/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    We are polluting air with deadly gases
    Ground water depleting with heavy access
    No one seems to be worried and tense
    We have gone berserk with loss of sense
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  • (10/6/2009 5:28:00 AM)

    Progress may be around but not to rejoice
    No one can claim prosperity with single voice
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  • (10/6/2009 5:18:00 AM)

    Nature may not spare us for committed sin
    We may have complete loss and situation no win
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  • (10/6/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    We never heard of tsunami or typhoons before
    So many natural calamities and disasters come to fore
    Earth quakes and floods have become scene of the day
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  • (10/6/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
    Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
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  • (10/6/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
    Nature may not spare us for committed sin
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  • (10/5/2009 11:37:00 PM)

    We are polluting air with deadly gases
    Ground water depleting with heavy access
    No one seems to be worried and tense
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  • (10/5/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
    Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
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  • (10/5/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    Sea is loosing charm and creatures disappear
    Land also not spared and heavily bears
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  • (10/5/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    We never heard of tsunami or typhoons before
    So many natural calamities and disasters come to fore
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  • (10/5/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    No one seems to be worried and tense
    We have gone berserk with loss of sense
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  • (10/5/2009 10:33:00 PM)

    We are polluting air with deadly gases
    Ground water depleting with heavy access
    world is reeling uder typhoons, , , floods..andhavocs all over....... we learnnothing yet.....10
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  • (10/5/2009 10:01:00 PM)

    Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
    No fresh air but only poison for inhalation
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  • (10/5/2009 9:06:00 PM)

    Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
    No fresh air but only poison for inhalation
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  • (10/5/2009 8:55:00 PM)

    Do we want compete disaster and annihilation.beautiful....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/5/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
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  • (10/5/2009 7:23:00 PM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
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  • (10/5/2009 3:37:00 AM)

    faith leaves no darkness and salvation birth the navel of awesome future...
    so visionary in return.....wonderful my friend...a lesson to accept and a broken tears to live beyond this day.....a perfect for reflection in prayer....thank you...i do love reading...God bless... a 10 +++++
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  • (10/5/2009 2:46:00 AM)

    ok, there will come a time that darkness seems to dominate...if when? , we don't know yet...when we close our eyes, nothing to see...but in nothingness...and in the absence of all those....mind still works ''on it''.......tsk, tsk...so captivating ha...highly appreciated dear.... (Report)Reply

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  • Spiritwind Wood (10/4/2009 8:39:00 PM)

    all i can say on this is WOW! ! -this is 10 poem-gets the point across-now if only people would learn (Report)Reply

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