Nur'ayn (new reign)

Rookie - 5 Points (29th January,1990 / Lagos, Nigeria)

Clueless - Poem by Nur'ayn (new reign)

Nature made me a vehicle without a break,
My motion is thus, a mandatory action.
Like everything that was created, I cannot stay young,
And have no map for my next destination.

Am I stupid or am I just dumb?
That I find it difficult to make a turn;
Too many turns with no knowledge of lies beyond,
And I can't not move to wait and deliberate the more.

Which turn will lead me to a land of freedom?
What do I do when I can't stop my motion to enjoy the freedom?
When eventually I leave, where will my next turn take me?
To success? horror? or my own destruction?

Who had been to hell, let them come and tell me how to not,
I cannot preserve my youth, nor can I refuse to age on;
Growing up is one single thought that makes me shiver in the sun,
As I remain clueless of into what man I'll eventually be transformed.


Comments about Clueless by Nur'ayn (new reign)

  • Kelvin Nwanji (12/14/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    new region if i may call you that, wonderful poem (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (9/26/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    a thought ful poem. the first line striking (Report)Reply

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  • Vikrant Jog (9/26/2012 3:17:00 AM)

    Good one mahn.... you going great with your work (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2012 5:06:00 AM)

    Wonderful thoughts very nicely written.Don't worry, you'll have a great future with good poetry, I'm sure.
    Best wishes.
    Chandra Thiagarajan
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  • (9/16/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    So true words! Stupendous is your skill of writing poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/4/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    very good.! i like this type of poems!
    good work dude.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 2, 2012



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