Dorsey Baker

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Color Of Togetherness - Poem by Dorsey Baker

Colors of the universe
seem to be blending
old wounds
slowly mending
the moon
seems to be getting bigger
every night
flooding us
with its mystic light
way out in the distance
the stars
suddenly
start to appear
although
millions of miles
away
they seem so near
night becomes day
a beautiful
morning has arrived!

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


Comments about Color Of Togetherness by Dorsey Baker

  • Chinedu Dike (10/1/2019 8:24:00 AM)

    Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2019 1:11:00 AM)

    Its mystic lights suddenly seems to appear
    Nights becomes morning becomes day
    A great thoughtful poem a a A+     (Report)Reply

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  • Poet Poet (3/14/2019 7:39:00 AM)

    very sublime and beautiful verse i have now read first
    glad you have poetic acumen of composing in metaphorical verse now read my poems you may
    MOM'S SMILES
    you have tears coming your way as ur a poet all here say     (Report)Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/12/2019 11:52:00 PM)

    Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
    The title is nice, so is the poem.     (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (3/12/2019 11:35:00 PM)

    beautifully written-
    every night
    flooding us
    with its mystic light///     (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2019 10:28:00 PM)

    The magical effect of a colorful manifestation of nature portrayed in an excellent verse. Congrats on the well deserved poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2019 12:51:00 PM)

    Astral awareness jumps out at you. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/12/2019 10:42:00 AM)

    Unity! ! !
    With the muse of the colours of the universe!

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.     (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2019 9:05:00 AM)

    Real happenings in universe are elegantly woven in to a wonderful poem. Well deserved positioning. X (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2019 7:51:00 AM)

    Congratulations Dorsey
    Looking forward to read more of your poems.Thanks.     (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (3/12/2019 7:01:00 AM)

    A soothing poem. With beautiful wordplay you have created a masterpiece. Loved it. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (3/12/2019 4:49:00 AM)

    in the distance
    the stars
    suddenly
    start to appear
    although
    millions of miles
    away
    they seem so near.......nature so wonderfully described. thank u. tony     (Report)Reply

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  • (3/12/2019 4:15:00 AM)

    A keen feeling for astronomy travels through this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (3/12/2019 4:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem dear poet. ....... thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/12/2019 3:21:00 AM)

    Even in this changing world unity is strength. With love and cooperation we can live happily. Nature reflects beautiful light. This is very interesting. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (3/12/2019 2:47:00 AM)

    You have drawn a very fascinating landscape on earth based on the changes caused by the movement of heavenly bodies in the sky. Thanks & Congrats, Dorsey Baker. (Report)Reply

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  • Castellenas John (3/12/2019 1:15:00 AM)

    Wonderful use of words. The poetry was magic. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (3/12/2019 12:41:00 AM)

    A marvelous poem of the day.
    Congrats dear Ma'am Dorsey for being selected....10+++++++++++     (Report)Reply

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