Monday, May 8, 2006

Counterfeit Stupid Cupid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stupid Cupid, many fallacies ascribe your destined trip
Of course I'd like to clip your wings, for an uneven fit
For ones, in-love-with, who are in-love-with another
Past sibling rivalry love or humanity’s type for a brother

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ArmourQuill Hunter
COMMENTS
Will Barber 18 May 2006

Wow. I enjoyed the passion, and the message and the words. Almost too intense to bear. Well, shouldn't poetry be that way? Dickinson's little poem 'I dreaded that first robin so - ' also contains quite a message. Not as stormy as yours, however! Not an easy experience, but Pegasus sometimes give one a rough ride.

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Geoff Warden 08 May 2006

AMEN and well said, this rings with truth

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