Esra Sloblock

* Cracking Up And Falling Apart

Is arse glue any good for other bits?
The other bits that are regularly laughed off?
If this carries on
(which it will)
I'll be made of the bloody stuff!

The silliest of jokes,
Or even a look,
And two mature (? !) professionals
Strain to contain
Bodily fluids

The orgasmic rise of pulsing air
Erupting in staccato bursts,
Eyes blinded by joyous tears,
Chuckle muscles overstretched.

If music be the food of love,
Try laughter and have a feast.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 4, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 5, 2011

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  • R H (9/16/2007 3:51:00 PM)

    Love and laughter go hand in hand here - testament to a perfect partnership. Joyful expression indeed. jz.x

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  • Alison Cassidy (9/14/2007 8:59:00 PM)

    An unselfconscious and joyful expression of the silliness and lunacy of love. Joy abounding. love, Allie xxxx

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  • Francesca Johnson (9/10/2007 11:59:00 AM)

    Oh, how you brighten up my day! ! Your poem, Ez, and those comments, all made me laugh so much....this is a happpppy one.

    Love, Fran xxx

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  • Ivan Donn Carswell (9/4/2007 10:32:00 AM)

    Damn Esra, I don't know whether I should comment on your poem or Tara's request you should stop doing it while she's drinking coffee! But as to glue, well we're all basically liquid held together with a secret binding substance so why not add a little more now and then? Looking forward to seeing if your arse is in the right place... Rgds, Ivan

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  • Original Unknown Girl (9/4/2007 4:39:00 AM)

    What a joy to read, I can just see you both rolling about in laughter! How fab is that? You brought the sensations to life here dear Ez.... HG: -) xx

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  • Theodora Onken (9/4/2007 4:10:00 AM)

    This is hilarious!
    I love it!
    Theo

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  • Tara very irritated with PH injustice (9/4/2007 3:44:00 AM)

    I love this sweetheart. As I love you. And I never knew I had such a talent for laughing. Not all of it at you of course. Teh heh. Please can you stop making me do it when I'm drinking coffee? :) t xxx

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