Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 396,536 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Creepers Of Dreamy Dawn - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Waking up half and sleeping half,
Opening eyes half and closing half,
Wild creepers are extending hands,
Stems and branches with fresh leaves,
Resting on other plants in dreamy row,
With little laziness these smile.

White lovely flowers opening funnels,
These are drinking dew of new dawn,
Green beautiful dream is flashing,
Far mountains and wild date trees
Together these are watching beauty.

Green Earth has worn silver veil,
Silvery seasonal weather recalls,
Creepers opening hands greet dawn,
Great fortune is written in purity.
Breakfast of morning is eaten half,
Half is not eaten as in dreamy state.
But still greenness is not dull,
Full strength creepers have gained,
Soon these will stand to sing song,
Glorifying creator's name forever,
Creepers will move towards paradise.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,13 July 2018. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, nature, perception

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,09 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Comments about Creepers Of Dreamy Dawn by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/14/2019 2:47:00 PM)

    Glorifying Creator's Name forever! ! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (7/22/2018 1:05:00 PM)

    Dear Kumarmani ji, what a beautiful poem on the creepers.
    They glorify creator's name and gravitate towards paradise.
    Enjoyed this poem, so full of love and beauty of nature. Wonderful...10
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  • Mahtab Bangalee (7/15/2018 3:43:00 AM)

    excellent line-

    Great fortune is written in purity.

    yeah right you are
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  • Kostas Lagos (7/14/2018 1:57:00 PM)

    Quite impressive poem mr. Mahakul.Indeed it is. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (7/14/2018 1:28:00 PM)

    Creepers are wonderful types of plants which are used in multiple purposes; one of the exclusive examples is they are most often used in exemplifying, ........ thanks for sharing the poem with us,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (7/14/2018 11:13:00 AM)

    Full strength creepers have gained/Soon these will stand to sing song/Glorifying creator's name forever/
    Creepers will move towards paradise.......Wonderful concept so nicely expressed! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10
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  • Valsa George (7/14/2018 8:11:00 AM)

    White lovely flowers opening funnels,
    These are drinking dew of new dawn

    Creepers with funnel shaped flowers in the misty dawn are looking towards heavens to glorify God! What a beautiful thought ! A lovely write!
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (7/14/2018)

    Fantastic mature write.
    The wild creepers are beautifully and vividly depicted
    In this marvelous poem
    Lovely piece of gem. Enjoyed reading it..10+++++
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  • Rini Shibu (7/13/2018 6:04:00 PM)

    Creepers will move towards paradise, well said (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 13, 2018



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